“BEEP, BEEP!!!!” I woke up to the sound of my alarm going off. I loligaged down the stairs to a hot piping breakfast. It was a delicious bacon and eggs. After eating I went up stairs and got dressed. When I came back down stairs to go to bus but, my mom decided to take me to shool. We got in the car and my moms phone rang. “yes, what no way!!, Michael turn on the radio” The radio said that the world trade center was hit by a plane. then another and finnaly they fell that day but nobody will ever forget it.
12
Sep
06






Nice setting it was a really good start but you could of made the ending a little better it seemed you just wanted to get it finished rather than going into detail.